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Vulnerability How Sweet

Have we had an experience? Definitely while there’s life We are prone to something, To someone anywhere Something vulnerable and unforgettable The most delicate time Is when we are young, full of energy And beauty exudes like diamond. Though not ready as yet We are really a prawn at prone It does not matter even age Extinction stops the chance At every dawn, falling in love is just one It is vulnerable as an open pore Oh, getting passionately in love Carries the burden of risk to gamble. However, we tend to make it an excuse Offer a solution, a medicine An ultimate remedy maybe a marriage But the vow is an acid test And goes with the time If we can make a turn around to endure Vulnerability is sweet, the way to live!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/23/2012 1:24:00 PM
This was very well written, i enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 4/26/2012 5:13:00 PM
That big step of falling in love does leave us vulnerable. Lovely poem Dalia, you say it so gently and with feeling! :)
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