Volcano

From with-in earth boils Violent eruption explodes The sky filled with ash Molten lava starts to pour In death new life will be born

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2020 11:43:00 AM

So very true. Devastation and death at first at first, then a rebirth. Nicely said, Michael. Eve

Bri Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 5:25:00 AM

hey. i can sense you probely lost sombody, or somthing and your trying 2 look over that by say even though a love one dies, there will be another life for a loss. thank you. for your coments on rebel, wish you luck, and beutiful,wonderful, inspirationale poem. thank you. <3's 2 u-bree

Steve Stavropoulos

Date: 8/14/2009 12:41:00 AM

this erupts my heart, great poem

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/5/2009 5:02:00 PM

very very nice tanka! Light & Love

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/11/2009 8:58:00 AM

cool tanka! Michael! Jim

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/10/2009 10:20:00 PM

Powerful tanka Michael, I crept to the preludes of your great work, nice job by the way. I enjoy writing tankas, I just haven't written any lately. I'll see if I can knock one out this week. Thanks for your support and God bless...Raul

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/13/2009 9:47:00 AM

Just browsing through your poems and ran across this one. It's my write about volcanoes down sized. Seems everything else in today's world is being down sized, might as well be a poem too. Enjoyed the write.

James Foulk

Date: 9/4/2008 9:08:00 PM

hey a good poem is a good poem what ever you call it. i just write them and don't fool around with what kind they are, that may be wrong but that is the way i write them. this was a very good poem and enjoyed reading it. I tanka for all the poetry you have read and I tanka for your comments. I know bad joke but hey what can i say.