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Voices Of The Dead

  
~^~ I lay in my bed dreaming fighting with the darkness, Like a serpent the memories come creeping; The voices of the dead are so loud. The past encompasses me like a thick blanket, I am trying so hard to push the pain away; The cemetery gate is opening wide. There is a hush in the rows of tombs and tombs, The voices of the dead are whispering; Finally I cannot resist any longer. I am falling into a dark void and I wander lost, Tossing and turning, murmuring names in my sleep; The tomb is wrapped in fog and vines. Standing before the cold engraved words in stone I fall to my knees weeping and lamenting; In the dark purple cloudless night. ______________________________ August 16, 2013 Verse Entered into the contest, Screwed, sponsor, Rob Carmack, 8th place Submitted to the contest, Any Poem, Any Subject, Anne Currin, N/A

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  1. Date: 3/31/2015 1:50:00 PM
    This is my kind of poetry! ...A dark and deeply soulful write that deserved more recognition. Congrats on a great win!

  1. Date: 3/26/2015 10:29:00 PM
    Deserved a win .....Seren

  1. Date: 3/24/2015 2:12:00 PM
    I went and saw this won the contest too. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/24/2015 6:58:00 AM
    congrats..lol

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:39:00 PM
    wonderful write - and the last line was so unexpected but just perfect

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Wow, the final line I really enjoyed, it make me feel better, "The voices of the dead quiet tonight."! You have enlightened me with another tremendous write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:03:00 PM
    - Proficient written, B.W.! - Good luck in the contest !!! - Wishing you a relaxed and pleasant weekend!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 2:59:00 PM
    just awesome, my friend. So sorry to hear you and Violet kitty have been poorly - hope you're both feeling much better x