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Voices In My Head

Did I tell you, I hear voices in my head, “Kill, kill,” I think that’s what they said. Spoke to my therapist but then she disappeared, Police questioned me, which I found weird. She’d been stabbed sixty times outside her front door, They called me in again and questioned me some more. That morning I woke covered in blood I buried the evidence near the marsh, in the mud I sat at home, the voices loud in my head, As the news report said now one hundred women dead. The voices etching the same word like a razor sharp quill, In my brain, “Kill, kill, kill, kill, kill.” I need fresh air, on this lovely, hot summer’s night But I find I’m standing behind the couch, watching you in plain site Turn around, look, you’ll see me with a knife Watch closely while I slowly take away your life… See you soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/23/2011 9:30:00 PM
lol... kind of like a jason movie.. but, not...lol.... enjoyed reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:33:00 PM
Criminal Minds is one of my favorite shows, Sid. There are people who hear voices that tell them to lash out at others. You've just given us a scary look into the minds of serial killers. Very intense and quite frightening. Power-packed dark poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/19/2011 8:06:00 PM
alright now it's time for bed, and I am looking under it before I go to sleep. lol great write!
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:46:00 PM
sounds pretty frightening.."I" must be a dangerous woman? but sometimes is better to just forget everything and fly away... to do what you please.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:16:00 PM
eerie, grotesque, beautifu, witty! you and your fascinating mind , sid! of for a contest, all my winning wishes! :)
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Date: 4/18/2011 5:36:00 PM
Awwww, you vicious person, you. lol A highly entertaining poem, my friend. This I would brand real poetry.
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