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Visit Me In a Dream

Come and visit me in a dream, And tell me how you are, Are you floating on a cloud? Have you found the brightest star? I know you're with us somewhere, Even though you can't be seen, Painting the bluest sky, Or among the grass so green. As I'm wandering through the park, Looking up at the trees, Daydreaming of the joy you brought, Will you visit me please? Just send me a little sign, White feathers on the breeze, To let me know you're happy, free And put my mind at ease. Or ask a passing stranger, With twinkling brown eyes, A cheeky smile, and baldy head, To nod as he passes by. Or maybe play a special song, Loud, on my radio, That could have been written just for you, About all the love we've known. Come visit me in a dream, And tell me how you are, I know you're there, a floating cloud, And one of the brightest stars.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/30/2011 8:13:00 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Sarah. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 4:06:00 PM
a beautiful thought in a beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/29/2011 3:38:00 PM
Nice!
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Sarah Judd
Date: 8/29/2011 3:40:00 PM
Thank you! :)

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