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Vision of Perfection

She is the vision of perfection carefully arranging her days and completing each task. The cocoon of feeling in control brings her comfort, keeping at bay feelings of fear and want. Neglected as a child, her need for affirmation runs deep. She is desperate for love. Glancing at the mirror she makes sure she looks happy. Fear of rejection haunts her. The day gone, she returns home. Alone, in the night, the pain sets in Leaving her in quiet desperation. She is the vision of perfection carefully arranging her pills They bring comfort, keeping her hurt at bay. Written on 3/4/2015

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John Fleming

Date: 3/7/2015 12:53:00 AM

I know someone very much like this. Once this sort of infection sets in it is desperately hard to deal with. I suppose that is what life is all about: Peaks and troughs! However tough we think, or other people might think, we are - we all need a hand up sometimes! Yep...even the toughest of guys - and thats a fact!! :) john.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2015 9:34:00 AM

I agree with you there, John. I know someone like this, too, and I thought of her when I wrote this. I really care about her, too, and keep her in my prayers.

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/5/2015 3:03:00 PM

This is sad and full of feelings that emphasizes the deep pain and hurt generated from the rippling effect of lonely years slipping away. Emile. #7

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/5/2015 3:10:00 PM

Opps, I guess I thought of the wrong contest! But you are a great poet, for sure! Sorry about that :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/5/2015 3:07:00 PM

Thanks for your comments, Emile. It's a simple poem, but I wanted it to be plain and clear. By the way, congrats on your win with the Pick A Subject contest! :)