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Vision In the Mood

Remember me as a sin of living path Render the loneliness of life Recollect the one and only life Redeem the voices of silence Flashing in the dew drops, the lovely horizon Flittering the hairy feathers, the lonely blossom Flowering the fertility of vision, the lovely mind Featuring the arena of life, the lonely silence Meditating in the minds of winter Murmuring the songs of theme Mingling the waves of water Meeting the cause of vain Dancing in the pyramid of hopes Delivering the words of power Dealing in the mood of core Dwelling the lights in color Seen in the darkness of cloud Sealing the veil of shy Scale in the drops of ideas Surrender in the wings of reality Loving the tale of passion Leaning the footsteps in fragrance Lingering the lips of flowers Leaving the scene in style

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/24/2016 3:47:00 PM
Sawan Kumar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:20:00 PM
:) happy new year
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Date: 1/31/2014 8:09:00 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Sawan
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Date: 1/30/2014 12:08:00 AM
I love the deep imagery resonating throughout the poem. Your title provokes thought - we usually try to see the words in the mood but the vision would be more compelling and definitely more interesting. Well penned Sawan!
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Sawan Kumar
Date: 1/30/2014 12:13:00 AM
Dear Vicky, Thanks for reading my small poem and giving fair comments. Any suggestions i can improve it. Regards Sawan
Date: 1/28/2014 1:42:00 PM
SAWAN, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
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Sawan Kumar
Date: 1/28/2014 10:16:00 PM
Dear Skat, Thanks for your kind response. Sawan
Date: 1/18/2014 3:45:00 PM
Sawan, enjoyed reading this poem. I think you intended stanzas based on the different letters so I gave you an honorable mention. Don't forget to view your poem after entering and add in extra lines to break up stanzas. Enjoyed reading this and like the differing contrasts in the groups. Thanks much for entering my contest, enjoyed reading it.
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Sawan Kumar
Date: 1/18/2014 10:25:00 PM
Hai Sheri Thanks for your valuable comment. Sawan
Date: 1/6/2014 4:46:00 PM
Sawan, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Sawan Kumar
Date: 1/6/2014 6:16:00 PM
Hai Skat Thanks for your valuable comment My name is Sawankumar aged 40 and working as application chemist in a company at Kuwait My mail Id is Sawankumar73@gmail. Com If you are interested you can come for a video calling after introducing yourself in return mail
Date: 1/6/2014 4:04:00 AM
Sawan,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/6/2014 3:31:00 AM
A stylish art with lots of inner meaning Poem with a sense of love
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Date: 1/6/2014 3:24:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Sawan ! - Your first poem - well written ! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sawan Kumar
Date: 1/6/2014 3:28:00 AM
Thanks for your valuable comment

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