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face lie closed off built on fear to forget my dreams and remember the things i hear making it harder for me to move on from my past knowing this pain i feel inside will continue with a burning that will never end

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Date: 12/23/2009 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Rebecca and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Rebecca! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:04:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:00:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/2/2009 11:38:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/2/2009 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rebecca. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2009 5:34:00 PM
Nice style. Sara
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