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Virgin Red Lips Waltzing With Color Red

He rises from the shores to his love where she dwells where true love is lost and capable of great love to kiss those virgin red lips that never felt passions love © 7/3/2015
Syllables Per Line: 1 2 1 2 3 2 1 2 3 4 3 2 1 2 3 2 1 2 1 http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_resources/syllable_counter.aspx Contest Name: Waltzing with Color Red Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 7/22/2015 11:58:00 PM
Eve,, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, Love your visits. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/20/2015 4:24:00 PM
The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, it sure has. Hugs dear friend
Date: 7/20/2015 3:41:00 PM
ooh la la. virgin red lips.So creative, Eve. Congrats in the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/20/2015 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for the congratulations it was fun to write . Hugs Eve
Date: 7/20/2015 3:24:00 PM
Eve, congrats for winning SKAT's contest! hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/20/2015 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, for the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/19/2015 3:25:00 PM
EVE, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/19/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Skat. ooxx
Date: 7/19/2015 1:33:00 PM
In this piece you so artfully brought out all the beauty and romance of the color red! Congratulations on your win, dear Eve! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/19/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita. ooxx
Date: 7/19/2015 9:33:00 AM
Wonderful write Eve... Congrats on your win
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/19/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. ooxx
Date: 7/19/2015 5:18:00 AM
a passionate poem Eve many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thank you,Jan. ooxx
Date: 7/18/2015 11:50:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem eve! Congrats on your win~ lee
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/19/2015 3:42:00 PM
Thank you, Lee. ooxx
Date: 7/18/2015 11:32:00 PM
A well written waltz wave, Eve! Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/19/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, I'm so glad you have enjoyed my work and bring more inspiration to write. ooxx
Date: 7/6/2015 3:42:00 PM
you did well with this color. VERy well!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/19/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. ooxx
Date: 7/5/2015 2:02:00 PM
Ah! those red virgin lips will soon know what passion is! Lovely scene you have set us to enjoy, Eve! gl in contest. // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/5/2015 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Hugs dear friend eve
Date: 7/3/2015 4:28:00 PM
This is very well written with impeccable imagery. Emile.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/3/2015 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Emile, for your inspiring words of encouragement. Hugs Eve

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