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Violin

First you hear it Its sweet and soft So quiet and loving You hear its sweet voice singing Among all others Then it gets louder and louder the notes warped around you like a Warm blanket you cant Help but listen to its sweet And beautiful melody Then it starts to sing but Now its angry and The notes get faster and faster Its like a tornado mixing everything Together but you Cant help but to listen to the violins sweet angry melody Swarming around you like a hive of bees Its addicting, its thrilling, its calming, and peaceful All raped up in one But soon its sweet voice slows and the end is Near you listen As the anger turns to sadness And then its voice just Disappears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 8:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:45:00 PM
Very interesting poem here. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:37:00 PM
Very addictive, Trina. I could find myself traveling along with your rythm. Keep up the good work, God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Trina. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2010 3:52:00 PM
Your freudian slip is quite interesting in itself and I like the tempo of your musical poem. What a pleasant sounding instrument the violin is. Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem. Love, Susan
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Date: 5/21/2010 12:27:00 PM
I love the violin too ;) nice write. Light & Love
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Date: 5/15/2010 10:09:00 PM
plz comment and rate thank u 4 reading my poem :)
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Date: 5/11/2010 8:24:00 PM
I really enjoyed this your writing is very detailed which i like. I can actually see and hear the violin.. very good *check spelling though warped raped
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