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                                   Women,captivating women....
                                   In our eyes like diamond
                                   And honey comb in the mouth,
                                   Only if savored with the 
                                   Right motive at the right time.
                                   Outside this,
                                   Women are vinegar.... 

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  1. Date: 11/1/2010 4:59:00 AM
    Interesting idea about women..Women are multpliers : give them love and they will give it back and even give you a child..Give them a house and they will make you a home...Buy them groceries and they will make many meals...Give them frustration and they will give you__Sara

  1. Date: 10/31/2010 11:05:00 AM
    I like what Doris said. Yes, we can be like vinegar or we can be as sweet as honey. Not all fit into one pickle jar. Ha ha ha. Phyl

  1. Date: 10/31/2010 9:45:00 AM
    yes,they are preserving,but can be sour like vinegar if contacted wrongly.

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 11:59:00 AM
    Women are sour yet preserving?

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 11:41:00 AM
    Good point, enjoyed the control of this poem :) Sheri