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Viking Plunder

The Viking gallery slipped quietly through the night the oars just barely skimming the gentle swell sails were fur-lowed tight to help hide it from sight the warriors ready for the signal sounded by the bell Silently they landed, ferocious was their appearance wielding their great battle axes wearing winged helmets they crept up on the sleeping village in timeless trance plundering and pillaging killing some helpless pets Taking captive the fairest of the maids enslaving burly men to work the gallery's oars, filling the hold with stolen treasure drinking wine from carved horns and spit roasting a tasty hen soon well into their cups they ravished most maids keeping one pure She of flaxen hair and hour glass figure and tender years was spared a most fitting present for their king, the rest would be auctioned for profit the coin added to the treasury. Now under full sail the waves they dared knowing a welcome most raucous awaited they now their torches lit Their king was most pleased with his gift and vowed they would be wed a great feast was prepared and the mead flowed thick and sweetly the Viking cheered as their king took the maid first as wife then to bed weeping as she was ravished, he rode her like a bull until she bled badly Back to the feast he downed some horns then lay down to sleep the maid waited until all was silent and then into his heart she struck deep she took back her shame as he lay dying knowing her own death she did reap turning the dagger on herself her life no value she slipped into eternal sleep written 05/01/2014 contest Any Poem Any Subject

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Date: 5/22/2014 11:55:00 AM
Hi Shadow, You have written a best selling novel here, One that Hollywood would love to make into a movie. Perhaps by Steven Spielberg. Yes that good. Thank you so much for sharing this write with us here and for visiting my writes and leaving the kindness. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/11/2014 6:18:00 PM
Awesome write! I read everything that has the word Viking in it. This gift is really good one. Thanks for posting this for us to enjoy.
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Date: 5/2/2014 2:09:00 PM
WOW! Shadow. I feel I have been to a movie! Such is the vividness of your imagery as it swamps my mind! I try hard in my own poems to leave a vivid image in the mind of my reader. But mine is a still photograph -- when I succeed. Yours is a full screen motion picture! I now mark you as one of my Fav Poets, so that I will not lose track of your imaginary work! Hugs;) Sam
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Date: 5/2/2014 2:18:00 PM
ty Sam I am so touched by your very kind comments and for favoring me. hugs
Date: 5/2/2014 7:59:00 AM
Strong and imaginative write Shadow! Sad ending....but epics do tend to elicit a tear or two! // paul
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Date: 5/2/2014 8:04:00 AM
ops what happen there lol ty Paul yes they do I try to write on many subjects rather than be repetitive hugs
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Date: 5/2/2014 8:01:00 AM
ty Rick inspired by Simon Williams (Bard of Exeter 2013) comment last night on Winscombe Face which I read at the meeting hugs
Date: 5/2/2014 7:33:00 AM
One of your best Shadow! 7
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Date: 5/2/2014 8:04:00 AM
ty Rick inspired by Simon Williams (Bard of Exeter 2013) comment last night on Winscombe Face which I read at the meeting hugs
Date: 5/2/2014 12:44:00 AM
wow, what a poem!! Is this for an epic type contest? VERY good story!! Like a twisted Romeo and Juliet tragedy. awesome.
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Date: 5/2/2014 4:29:00 AM
hi Andrea ty for your wonderful comment no it is not presently intended for any contest. I may try to develop it into a story though hugs
Date: 5/1/2014 11:33:00 PM
A good approach.
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Date: 5/2/2014 4:30:00 AM
ty Muhammad hugs

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