Vigor

In full splendor now Dried up, dying tomorrow Laughter and sorrow. KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 25 February 2015

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/25/2015 11:46:00 AM

What an insightful write here KIM........A.M.

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/13/2015 12:07:00 PM

Yes, with a few words you have said nicely. You are one of my favorite poetess. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Paul Callus

Date: 2/28/2015 12:27:00 PM

You expressed it all in a nut shell, Kim. Very good haiku..#7 I have been through a great part of it:) // paul

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/27/2015 9:32:00 AM

You have just described LIFE!!! Love, Jack xxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/27/2015 9:43:00 AM

This site sometimes is a puzzle and annoying but I couldn't live without it... keep trying, my sweet! xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2015 11:49:00 PM

I agree with John Wulf here. Powerful one!! Glad that Armand was so kind to you . He went out of his way for so many~~

Steven Hanlon

Date: 2/26/2015 5:04:00 PM

thnx kim i was fishing for that. not big on technical knowledge. better word up

James Fraser

Date: 2/26/2015 2:00:00 PM

So true Kim, wise words indeed, James :)

Rajkumar Thoungamba Meitei

Date: 2/26/2015 1:45:00 PM

Indeed life is a complete package. We only have to acknowledge every bit's importance. Nice work. :) Rajkumar

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/26/2015 11:32:00 AM

Majestically profound, dear Kim! A seven!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/25/2015 8:57:00 PM

Yes, life is so unpredictable and it can change in an instant... You've expressed much in very few words. A beautiful and soulful write, Kim!

Steven Hanlon

Date: 2/25/2015 6:11:00 PM

thanks kim, wow and zen

David Meade

Date: 2/25/2015 10:14:00 AM

the dance between laughter and sorrow -- we need both . . how would we know the difference between the heights and depths without the other . . . may our sorrows rise with laughter of day break. Loved this haiku dearest one!! 7, fav

Hija De La Luna

Date: 2/25/2015 8:29:00 AM

Crazy lovely Kim, this is another beautiful reality. Glad to have read this today! Love your write as always

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2015 7:57:00 AM

- A great Haiku Kim, word of truth ..... first laugher ..... later sorrow !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/25/2015 7:32:00 AM

Thank you Kim.. pleased that you enjoy reading my poems.. nad

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/25/2015 7:08:00 AM

Very true Kim... nad