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Victim of Susceptible Disgrace

The night was odd, dark, and nowhere to seen People shuttered in the most crucial way I beg some help, I'm so frightened The tone of his voice The dagger he tightly hold The mark he burnt in my legs, I crawled He crashed me like I was stoned My eyes closed, terribly knocking for justice Blood runs to my veins, blood runs for crime Tormented, wanting truth Chanting a lightless tone The anatomy of hide and seek For I tortured and slowly meek Years of slavery, bitter case He held me like I'm a victim of susceptible disgrace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/8/2015 7:58:00 AM
I love when poems have stories in them, situations that beg to be told. Now I only hope this is fiction, it has an intensity to it. Keep bringing to life characters with your writes! :)
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Amor Otong
Date: 2/8/2015 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Casarah. Its such an honor to hear your opinion. I love tragedies, no happy ending kind of story, situational, reality. Love, Amor. Looking forward to see your works too. :)

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