Viagra

My husband thinks Viagra is the best Most men take it for the zest But he takes it for his rest It keeps him safely in his nest Now he doesn't roll out of bed Or wake-up with bumps on his head He doesn't need all the fun For he's seventy-one © 7/18/2015

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Eric Boddie

Date: 8/5/2015 11:58:00 AM

not quite what I expected....still, radiant Beauty was reflected....you took a stereotypical issue, and you did dissect it....so it is true that your skill remains erected....;)

Eve Roper
Date: 8/5/2015 1:36:00 PM

Hahaha..... this was just a funny to make everyone laugh. I'm very tickled to see that you did enjoy it and were able to add to my poem. Hugs dear friend

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 7/19/2015 11:47:00 PM

Now there's an original use for it. Like a built-in kickstand..lol all of these are hilariously funny.

Eve Roper
Date: 7/20/2015 1:35:00 PM

Janet, that kickstand does help sometimes, I'm so tickled you enjoyed. Hugs Eve

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/19/2015 11:24:00 PM

Eve you are not getting old, you are getting wise! Pick up your paint brushes and dream, you will also be sweet in my eyes!

Eve Roper
Date: 7/20/2015 1:34:00 PM

Thank you, Arthur, you are so sweet. I do to need to pick up my paintbrushes I have updated since last summer just a couple of silly things of my granddaughter. Thank you for the compliment hugs Eve

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 4:29:00 PM

a fun read this was!

Eve Roper
Date: 7/20/2015 1:36:00 PM

Skat, thank you for reading the poem. Hugs Eve

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/19/2015 11:21:00 AM

:-))) This is funny, Eve! You guys were having so much fun that I woke up from my writing slump! Got me inspired to write my own ditty! Thanks, Eve! hugs!

Eve Roper
Date: 7/19/2015 3:28:00 PM

Kim, your poem was wonderful. Thank you so much for the compliment I'm glad it inspired you. Hugs