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Verlorene Tage/ Lost Days/ Días Perdidos

Tage verlieren sich Im Nichts der vergehenden Zeit Wie einsames Herbstlaub Days vanish in oblivion In nowhere of the passing time Like solitary autumn foliage Días se caen en olvido En la nada del tiempo pasando Como hojas solitarias de otoño

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Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/22/2010 8:53:00 AM

This is a lovely wistful senryu Gert, and so true how those days just vanish into nowhere ~ Sharon

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2010 9:38:00 PM

Good morning again, yes I am so glad i did not miss any of your new ones,.Have yourself a wonderful day,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/11/2010 2:47:00 PM

HI Gert! Magandang umaga :) Just saying hi from my side of the world and thanking you for all your wonderful comments-- & yup First Flood for you indeed, yikes hopefully the last too? and hmm lost days...maybe they'll be found soon, hopeuflly not a lot of lost days though-- enjoy your Huwebes :) ingat -- nikko :)

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 8/10/2010 10:35:00 PM

so autumn...I love the solemn tone...^_^ v

David Byrne

Date: 8/9/2010 4:55:00 PM

very good Gert!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2010 2:44:00 PM

Great write that expresses the idea so well..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/7/2010 10:42:00 AM

Beautiful senryu Gert!! Love your concept of how days just "vanish"-- very unique! And thank you so much for always commenting in my poems ^_^ enjoy reading them :) Maulan ngayon dito, sana ang panahon dyan mas ayos. (It's rainy over here, I hope you're weather there is better)-- nikko :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2010 6:20:00 AM

Had to stop by and add this to my favorites. Been thinking about it and dreamt about the autumn of life last night. Thank you, Gert. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/7/2010 5:52:00 AM

Gert I absolutely love this piece, hope you are having an excellent weekend, bb Wilma Lekker dag verder :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/7/2010 5:38:00 AM

My son has to go back to school next week and we are taking him to a movie today. WE go the rain last evening it did not last long.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/7/2010 5:33:00 AM

Enjoyed this haiku today!!

David Byrne

Date: 8/6/2010 7:46:00 PM

great!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/6/2010 1:11:00 AM

certainly do Gert, my sentiment also, wonderful poem this is. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 8:39:00 PM

A nice pen picture of solitude, Gert.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/5/2010 8:32:00 PM

Excellent way to describe a forever life of solitude. Interesting Gert, enjoyed,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 7:09:00 PM

Special words to this Senryu Gert.. enjoyed the visual effects of each line my friend.. grazie.. did I do OK on my VOLARE poem with the dialect? it did win in the contest but my word spell made me apprehensive at best.. thankxxx for all your help and translations.. my friend..with luv..

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 8/5/2010 6:11:00 PM

This gem goes tmfvs..Ruben would love this if he reads it,Great work of art. .tmfvs. .C.C

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/5/2010 6:11:00 PM

Oh yes, time waits for no man. The autumn foliage is a reminder that our days of beauty and life are numbered. Excellent senryu, Gert! Love, Carolyn