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Vera's Silence

Very seldom Vera stepped outside to enjoy a day of sunshine, such a gentle lady, somewhat pretty. Her golden strands of hair, streaked with gray, hung on a body too lean and fragile and one seeing the many bruises on her sagging face: abuse she could declare. Why didn't she rebel and find courage to run? Was it because of the constant fear of her heartless man? And being separated from society, her isolation got worse instead; all was crystal clear: friends didn't have to walk in her shoes to understand. Had this fearful woman spoken against her abuser, she would have found support... saved moments of agony and given her shattered life an outlook of worth; everyone knew she a chance to free herself, but Vera's silence couldn't be broken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/23/2014 6:12:00 AM
Stunning write! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/21/2014 10:30:00 PM
Well done Andrew....Seren
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Date: 4/21/2014 6:39:00 PM
Andrew, , Loved how you extracted this one away. Congratulations, this is a great win, for such a painful and realistic theme, when writing about this topic, In which phantom's around Abused Women. Have a nice day:) ~LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2014 4:53:00 PM
Thank you for entering the contest, Andrew and congratulations on your placement. Sometimes it is tough - sometimes people wait to be asked to help, when the abuser is too ashamed to ask. Had she "spoken against her abuser, she would have found support" ... but it takes courage, conviction and self-respect to do so - those things the abuser have beaten out of her. One suggestion: take a look at your last line, I think a word might be missing. Thanks. Joe
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Date: 3/21/2014 12:55:00 AM
Beautifully told Andrew... Domestic violence is rarely not sustained without keeping the peace and dealing with the abuse silently. I enjoyed my visit... Verlena
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