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Vein of Life

Full river flowing into the open bay. Standing on a stone bridge. On a morning day. Levy’s are built to hold water in. To stop the cycle of, Embankment water erosion. A main flowing, vein of life. Keeps our world fresh, and all things alive..

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Date: 4/2/2010 2:31:00 PM
What an uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us. Nice use of imagery. Happy Easter! Karen
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jack. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:43:00 AM
Why yes, they are very much like veins of life. Good analogy, Jack. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:28:00 AM
I enjoyed that, thanks
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