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Veiled Threat

sand flying hazily in a desert storm ---------------------------------- Contest: Lanterne Frenzy Sponsor: Ir0nic Zink

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James Fraser

Date: 4/5/2015 2:18:00 PM

Sandstorm captured in so few words. With so many sandstorms in the deserts around the world, it makes me wonder as to what lies beneath them // James....

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 3:17:00 PM

I am sure many places of interest are buried beneath layers of sand...who knows how many lives have been lost in deserts, too! Thank you for stopping by, considering it's stormy weather on my page:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/5/2015 1:58:00 AM

i've experience this myself.. caught on the road and just few miles you can see the sands.. weeeeeeee. scary!!! i mean zero visibility..

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 9:27:00 AM

I know you have, Olive_eloi!! Would not want to be caught in one myself! I hate flying sand...it stings and gets everywhere! On the beach in calm weather it's totally different:) hugs // paul

Kim Shaw

Date: 4/4/2015 8:39:00 PM

Hi Paul! It amazes me how so few words can convey such a big picture. Very effective choice of words. A 7!! Happy Easter to you and your family! Hugs, Kimberly

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 9:37:00 AM

Thank you, Kimberly, for both lovely comments and the 7 rating! I also wish you and your loved ones a very Blessed & Happy Easter! hugs // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 4/4/2015 11:12:00 AM

I can picture perfectly the sandstorm in your awesome lanterne poem my very dear friend, Paul. Thank you so much for sharing! Have blessed Lenten and Easter Season to you and your family/loved ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thank you Leonora. Pleased that you found my little Lanterne to your liking. Thank you also for the Easter wishes; I too wish you a very Blessed and Happy Easter. Hugs /x/ paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/4/2015 10:18:00 AM

Outstanding..So vivid the view of a sandstorm.I got caught in it .: ) Happy Easter,God bless you and your loves ones !!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2015 4:14:00 PM

Hi Charm! Thank you for the positive feedback. A Happy Easter to you, too! // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2015 6:34:00 AM

Enjoyed experiencing your sandstorm..A real one would not be so good..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2015 4:12:00 PM

I am pleased that you enjoyed my mini sandstorm, Sara! Sure enough, better than a real one:) Take care. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2015 6:06:00 AM

So few words say so much - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward

Date: 4/4/2015 4:09:00 AM

I can see and taste that sand. // 7 // Hugs, Julia, xx

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2015 4:11:00 PM

Thank you Julia; appreciate the high rating. Happy Easter to you:) hugs // paul