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Vast Reflection

light year daze
objects burst in seams and blaze
starry blinks

farther still
burning in a fiery haze
planets turn

vast in sight
dark and bright in part and whole
earth reflects 


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  1. Date: 6/2/2013 2:51:00 PM
    This write is a beautiful language/concept puzzle Laura - cosmological metamorphasis - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 5:31:00 PM
    Hey, nice that you think the universe is so big. It's such a pleasure to see that you consider these things so gracefully.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 1:59:00 PM
    Hello Laura, now that's a refection. I like the starry twinkling image... nice crafted haiku... Linda