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Vanishing Gifts

                   Vanishing Gifts

                 The river flowing
                 The wind blowing
                 come back,keep doing
                 The time crawling
                 The life flying
                 come back never,vanishing.

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  1. Date: 10/17/2009 10:58:00 AM
    What a message Chacko .. glad u liked my Christmas Poem from NJ... hope Carolyn, the contest person, sees it that way also... she did send me a comment about it yesterday as she is also from NJ...

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 6:07:00 AM
    Thank you for posting your splendid poetry that we all may read it Chacko. It was a very enjoyable read for me this morning. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 2:47:00 PM
    Just as the wind and river continue their motion, time does so as well. And although the river and wind exist in perpetuity, the end of an individual's lifetime is finite. Much said in six brief lines, Chacko! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 2:44:00 PM
    love the title! love the flow!... good work! Chacko!... jim

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 1:43:00 PM
    That river of life just keeps going on down to the ocean doesn't it. I like the form in which you presented the idea. Keep writing. Sara