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Vanished Vitality

VANISHED VITALITY Vibrant villa then, uninhabited now stands squalid with locked rusted gate 9th November 2016 For One Liner Contest Sponsored by Rick Parise Theme- The Rusted Gate

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2016 8:47:00 PM

You excel at these short alliterative one liners. Great vocabulary!!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2016 7:03:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in one line, Anu:) a 7:)

Anu Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:32:00 AM

Dear Jo, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words:) glad you liked my one liner:) you are generous Jo:)//love, Anu:)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2016 6:31:00 AM

fabulous imagery and alliteration anu:-) hugs Jan xx

Anu Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:31:00 AM

Dear Jan, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words:) glad you liked my one liner:)//love, Anu:)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/9/2016 6:23:00 AM

I can well picture your one-liner, Anu. It's time for new owners to bring it back to life! ~ Regards // paul

Anu Nayak
Date: 11/10/2016 11:30:00 AM

Dear Paul, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and words, yeah...its time there is a new change! its a fiction anyways:)//love, Anu:)