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Vanguard Ute

Carol Brown Contest Name My First Car
Vanguard ute I got meself a motor car, a little ute, a Vanguard, I was seventeen, yes sah, low flying and sliding here and there, Me an brother Mark were a going fishing, At 75 miles an hour, I hit a hi speed bend, Feet of water lurked in a dip, unwitting, It did us airborne send, Flying on a cushion of water, Guide posts were a flashing by, Fascinating sort of, sorta, Slow motion with a sigh? After 50 feet we finally touched down, Me brother wouldn’t bloody speak His forehead held a frown, 50 miles an hour, how neat, No he didn’t dob me in, Old car was still orright, So then I took him sideways, On a corner, not in spite. I was young and stupid, Much older now Kanga Roo Ted… Young n stupid flying low, big ol thrill 4 johnson though, having fun an sliding so, me mates would not come a driving:)

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Date: 3/13/2012 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on the great placement with this Don,, tell me was she a sky blue..?
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Don Johnson
Date: 3/13/2012 4:28:00 PM
mushroom and white two tone...had a massey ferguson tractor engine 4 cylinder....had racing grooves in the doors....had it been a v8 id be deadly ded....:) thanks Joe
Date: 3/13/2012 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations Don, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:42:00 PM
congrats DON on a grand first place win for a spectacular entry luv.. sounds like a real charmer..
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2011 11:25:00 PM
a very interesting poem... i will be hoping to see yours among the winners... good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:22:00 PM
What a car that must've been. You must have a lot of memories with it. I enjoyed your poem, very well written!
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Date: 8/26/2011 4:13:00 PM
As always I enjoyed your lingo, wish I could write in that lingo, Don
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/26/2011 6:53:00 PM
Well mate spend some time with the Aussies we might convert you:)
Date: 8/26/2011 2:13:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Don. I love poetry that is written from the heart as I believe that is where the best poetry comes from. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with Love, Good Health and loads of Inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2011 7:17:00 AM
I remember saying to my brother, pole or ditch, as we spun out of control. He picked ditch. Tony
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/26/2011 7:28:00 AM
Young n stupid flying low, big ol thrill 4 johnson though, having fun an sliding so, me mates would not come a driving:)

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