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Vampiric Dawn

The Dawn crept over the monochromatic hills with the stealth of a vampire. Bleeding into blue-black veined forest through a lilac haze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/12/2009 5:56:00 AM
Wow Deborah - What a wonderfully delightful way to describe the dawn - very original - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/12/2009 5:52:00 AM
This is quite the dramatic read, offering an eerie tone with a darkness lingering. Love the almost gothic like imagery within this. Very well written. Michael
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