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Valentine's Orchard

My heart, An arid land was Unamble a single feeling to produce Till that Valentine's day When Into my life, she walked, And With her kind words Her soft caresses Her moistening kisses, Succeded in turning it Into a plentiful orchard of Love! © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 FEBRUARY 2015

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Date: 2/14/2015 2:06:00 PM
very beautifully painted demetrios not been on line much these days wishing you a blessed beautiful valentines
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/16/2015 3:29:00 AM
Liam, my friend, how wonderful to see you again. Thank you for your visit and comment!
Date: 2/11/2015 3:46:00 PM
Wow...you inject this poem with fresh love and a lively spirit. Your work confronts beauty in its totality and comes up a winner, supplying a subtle grace that is gently distributed throughout your poem. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/12/2015 1:19:00 AM
Kind, Sir, hardly my humble poem deserves such a glorious comment and grading, however, I thank you from the depths of my heart for your visit and your noble appraisal.
Date: 2/11/2015 2:19:00 PM
Delightful dear friend . . . sweet is the gardening of the orchard . . . a wonderful refuge of love. 7
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Date: 2/11/2015 3:12:00 PM
Yes, my friend, David! With the Lord's blessing the orchard is, as you say " a wonderful refuge of love." Thank you for your generosity!
Date: 2/11/2015 12:21:00 PM
Beautiful Valentine poem, Demetrios. May you and your wife and family have a wonderful Valentines Day with lots of blessings. Eve
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Date: 2/11/2015 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much my good friend, Eve! God bless you!
Date: 2/11/2015 7:01:00 AM
- From my heart: Beautiful! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:46:00 AM
Anne-Lise, my friend, so wonderful to receive your visit and precious comment!
Date: 2/11/2015 6:56:00 AM
Thrilling....in every way!!! Oh...how superbly sweet! May the orchard produce for long the delicious fruit of love. Hugs
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:45:00 AM
You are so kind my dearest poetess to visit and comment once again! Thank you so much, dear Eileen!
Date: 2/11/2015 5:12:00 AM
Simply beautiful and sweet, sire. A 7. Happy Valentine's, sire. Smiles from the land of thousand isles. Kim :)
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Date: 2/11/2015 5:34:00 AM
Welcome my dear, Kim, from " the land of thousand isles", thank you so much for you dear visit and lovely comment not to forget your generous grading! Greece, although small in comparison, has thrice the number of islands but...small ones! Ha-ha!
Date: 2/11/2015 4:10:00 AM
That orchard is still producing.
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Date: 2/11/2015 4:51:00 AM
Oh, yes, my good friend, Tim! Thank God for it!
Date: 2/11/2015 3:19:00 AM
oh how romantic - love is in the air :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/11/2015 3:26:00 AM
It is lovely when you get such a lovely surprise - I got POD last week and didn't know until i got comments:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/11/2015 3:24:00 AM
Thank you , Jan! You are inspiring! Thank you also for informing me about the POTD!

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