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Valentine Surrender

Quest Purple crimson Quaking churning flowering Wildfire culmination fountain euphoria Dreaming drinking eating Restless deep-pink Collapse ______________________________________________________________ 13/01/2017 : For Valentine - Form D contest of Broken Wings Note: Definition of Diamante in Poetry Soup: The purpose is to go from the subject at the top of the diamond to another totally different (and sometimes opposite) subject at the bottom. A seven line poem, shaped like a diamond.

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/20/2017 10:51:00 PM

Delightful Diamante! Congratulations!

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/21/2017 10:35:00 AM

Thank you ...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/14/2017 3:22:00 AM

A good diamond in a tough form, Probir:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/14/2017 4:16:00 AM

Thank you, Jo ... may be, but I enjoy writing in this form ... probir ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/14/2017 2:13:00 AM

A flawless diamond dear, Probir! A seven.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/14/2017 4:19:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios ... may or may not be .... but your attitude is flawless no doubt ...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/13/2017 9:43:00 PM

Great diamante, Probir! Good luck in the contest.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 11:24:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes ... Your opinion definitely contributes to its being at least 'como diamante ' ....Probir ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2017 6:59:00 PM

way to do a diamante, Probir. It's a great little form to work with!

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:06:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea ... probir ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/13/2017 2:05:00 PM

Very good poem, Probir. Your language and form combined makes for an excellent poem. What Valentine wouldn't love getting a poetic diamond like this. Very stylistic and romantically sublime poetry. Excellent work. Love and peace to you.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:07:00 PM

Thank you, Freddie, ... probir

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2017 2:03:00 PM

- A lovely diamond, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:08:00 PM

Thank you, Anne ... probir

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/13/2017 10:05:00 AM

ohhh, a flaming kind of valentine, probir.. huggs

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:10:00 PM

Now that you like it, so it is a tested diamond ... Thank you, nette ... probir