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Valentine

Heart breaking with its longing for you with ears waiting for your whispers Arms aching to enfold you in a clean smell of love Lips all of a tingle Eyes ashine B E .x M Y x VALENTINE For the rest of our lives

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 1/15/2013 3:03:00 PM

A wonderful sweet write Seren....congrats on your win! Hugs

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Cecilia, much appreciated

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/15/2013 10:34:00 AM

good thoughts and congratulations on this well deserving win....

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 12:14:00 PM

Thank you Mehnaz thanks for stopping by...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/15/2013 10:16:00 AM

catching up, Seren, congrats for this deserved no 1

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 12:13:00 PM

Thanks Harry I appreciate your comment....Seren

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2013 7:54:00 PM

Congrats! ~SKAT

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 9:30:00 PM

Thank you Skat........Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2013 6:26:00 PM

Seren, . ;-) Congratulations with your lovely poem. In Mystic Rose' "Be My Valentine" contest. Always~ PD

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 9:29:00 PM

Hi PD many thx for your congrats.....Seren

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 1/13/2013 5:37:00 PM

Wonderful poem. I'll toast to that

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 6:07:00 PM

Cheers Jon ......Seren

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 1/13/2013 4:06:00 PM

Excellent piece,Seren...Congrats on your super win...

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 5:26:00 PM

Thank you so much ......Seren

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/13/2013 2:46:00 PM

Nice use of form! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 5:26:00 PM

Many thanks Debbie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/13/2013 12:49:00 PM

This is a well worthy winner luv, she didn't like mine at all lol xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 12:53:00 PM

thanks Mandy you are a brilliant poet... Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/13/2013 10:45:00 AM

Very cool and well done. Thanks for the sip of sweet love.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 10:48:00 AM

aww thank you Richard.... Seren

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/13/2013 9:24:00 AM

Nice shape. I like the little ekses.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 9:46:00 AM

my kisses awwww thanks Isaiah .....Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/13/2013 5:53:00 AM

Those are not so easy to do..Enjoyed reading this early Valentine..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 9:06:00 AM

Thank you Sara......i enjoyed using the shape form...Seren

Charles Clive

Date: 1/13/2013 4:34:00 AM

What fun. Beautifully laid out. And thank you for your kind comments, Charles.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 9:06:00 AM

my pleasure Charles, thanks for stopping by....Seren

David Williams

Date: 1/13/2013 3:08:00 AM

Seren shucks ok....David

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/13/2013 9:07:00 AM

haha Shucks back......seren

Rollo West

Date: 1/12/2013 10:14:00 PM

Wow Seren, you sold me, would be happy to be your Valentine. Rollo

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/12/2013 10:50:00 PM

Awwww Rollo, you would, wow it worked....Seren

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/12/2013 9:01:00 PM

Such a lovely valentine !!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/12/2013 9:03:00 PM

Thank you Debra ....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/12/2013 7:56:00 PM

This is a very beautiful and gorgeous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and amazing poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, you have painted a remarkable poem here, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/12/2013 9:03:00 PM

Thanks Russell .....Seren