V Shaped Cloud

The cloud formation V shaped like geese going home Colored by the sun

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Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2009 12:56:00 PM

Love the last line, beautiful haiku.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/16/2009 7:54:00 PM

interesting insight! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2009 6:31:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Sara. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. I hope you will consider becoming a premium member here at the Soup. Love,Carol

James Fraser

Date: 9/11/2009 1:36:00 PM

Lovely sight the geese in formation Sara, and a beautiful bird on land and in the air>>James

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/11/2009 6:49:00 AM

You painted a beautiful image with this perfect Haiku! Love, Robin

James Peranteau

Date: 9/11/2009 4:35:00 AM

This must have been an awesome sight Sara ! Great poem ! james