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She wanted to soar high, But unfortunately got grabbed by evils' hands. She fluttered her wings so hard to break out, but failed. For numerous months, they ruthlessly kept on unfeathering her and destroying her V. They annihilated her all dreams and desires, and lastly threw her in the lost world. With the pain of the large balloon stomach; She sobbed alone all night under the street-light. She lost her mind; As the dolor pushed her in black hole. Then, limping and weeping, she went to sea shore, laid herself and kept waiting for the mighty waves to take her away from this black world forever. ______________________________________ Written Date - 29th April 2016 Submission date on Poetry Soup - 27th September 2016 Contest - Melancholy Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 10/3/2016 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.I enjoyed this poem,and I felt her pain.I also felt that I wanted to recuse her.A sad poem but I enjoyed it.
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Date: 9/28/2016 11:51:00 PM
This is a terrible reality for many...sad and drained...OMG..Well penned! Congrats :)
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:33:00 PM
Thank you. Mam.
Date: 9/28/2016 3:31:00 PM
Augustus, congratulations on your fine placement in the contest with your sad and well written melancholy poem. Sandra
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Augustus Black
Date: 9/29/2016 10:33:00 PM
Thanks a lot Mam
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Augustus Black
Date: 9/29/2016 10:28:00 PM
Thanks a lot Mam
Date: 9/27/2016 3:26:00 PM
Lovely, sad ending. Great free verse. Blessings, Janis
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Date: 9/28/2016 1:32:00 AM
Thanks a lot.
Date: 9/27/2016 3:15:00 PM
wow, this is great melancholy, Augustus. I am so happy to read here that you got a great placement. BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 9/28/2016 1:34:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/27/2016 11:43:00 AM
I can't believe I got such good placement. I am just very very excited.
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Date: 9/27/2016 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations August on the placement of the contest
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Date: 9/27/2016 11:42:00 AM
Oh! thank you so much.
Date: 9/27/2016 9:46:00 AM
Augustus-.congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Augustus Black
Date: 9/27/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thank you so much.

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