Us Two

Me and you,its just us two, on days we laze, and gaze.......You and i, we laugh and cry but agree to never say goodbye...why?...........because we know to grow we must let it show all the love of life, with no stress or strife..so we just laze, and gaze us two....after all thats how love grew.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 2:10:00 AM

kiperly aiken, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 12:42:00 PM

Kiperly, Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 7:00:00 AM

I am stopping back to see if you have added any new poems to your list. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry with the world Kiperly. You have taken a big step here and I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will check back again another day. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2012 1:27:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Mark Mcallister

Date: 10/15/2012 8:36:00 AM

not my kind of thing but this works, very nice and warm, the simple rhyming adds charm and the entire piece sounds sincere

Annie Lander

Date: 10/15/2012 8:13:00 AM

message is clear.. me and you, it just us two come to me. great lines