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Upon our Lake

Petroleum translucent wings wave upon a sage green moss
Whilst vibrating webs in fevered mood delight a flies flight loss
Tinkering thoughts they travel over a calming cool breeze break
Smiling eyes, a touch, a breath, do beguile upon one gentle lake

Cotton thoughts on wistful clouds disturb differing hues of blue
Emerald, limes, rusted umbers enhance breezes as they move
A whimsical dash of mottled fish engrossed in lifes harsh fight
To gather all required whilst avoiding, the silent fishers sight

A hand does stroke the waters as thoughtfully as a lovers face
Whilst oars and gentle droplets dance at such a soothing pace
Non returnable ripples travel onwards with no due care
Words, sights, scents, sounds, precious memories that we share

One day we will be but whisps that relished this cherished place
As lovers new will float on by with a fresh renewed embrace
And maybe if they are just like us they will sit and ponder on
Lovers who were once like them but now are sadly gone

Copyright © Karen Deeks

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  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:45:00 AM
    A golden pearl ! Well done Karen! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Deeks Avatar Karen Deeks
    Date: 6/3/2012 2:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    tyvm you too anne-lise... karen
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:29:00 AM
    to read it is to love it Karen my sweet!

    Deeks Avatar Karen Deeks
    Date: 6/3/2012 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    tyvm don for your kind words ... karen