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Up In the Sky

Up ..in the sky On this man made bird I fly Away from the streets of chaos To the clouds white , fluffy and sublime. Flying to a city miles away On the other side of the globe Different from the home you know Anticipations are galore One sees around the faces that are bound Some to meet dear ones Some to a greener pasture found Some too old that suffer the journey Some so young that that they cry plenty The long flight hours Evoke thoughts like flowers Of what has been achieved And what lies ahead In the path you chose In the life you own Faces that on ground are always tense Seem relaxed and smiling which is rare Almost like a pause in between The maze of tensions our lives constantly breed The stillness of the flight Does relax ones mind Wish one could Do this more On the ground on what we call home Cause as soon as one lands You can see the restlessness back To grab your bags To hail the cab To rush to office To make some more profit To buy something more To make calls galore To worry and get bored To be loved or ignored To be healthy or sick To be poor or rich To be irritated or upset To be wanting ...that never ever ends No doubt though it may be a few The hours in the clouds Were so calm and cool It does give one a good insight To where one stands in ones life Thoughts in a place that gravity defies High ...up ...up in the sky.

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Date: 6/8/2016 8:31:00 PM
Nice One. Congrats on being featured this week. love phyl
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Vivek Malhotra
Date: 6/8/2016 11:54:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/29/2016 1:33:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Vivek. :)
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Vivek Malhotra
Date: 5/30/2016 8:01:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/22/2016 4:00:00 PM
Vivek, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Vivek Malhotra
Date: 5/23/2016 12:05:00 AM
Thanks SKAT for the welcome.
Date: 5/22/2016 12:04:00 AM
That's a nice NotE on the bottom. That's SO nice to see you add it... LindA
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Date: 5/22/2016 12:04:00 AM
Vivek, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@", -fa
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Vivek Malhotra
Date: 5/22/2016 12:34:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome Linda. Will definitely read yours, my poetic skills I personally feel are zero..lol, i write poems within 15-30 mins maximum and most of them are quite mostly what i feel about life and things one see's around, hopefully over time the topics might diversify but frankly im happy if the poem comes out as quick as they do.
Date: 5/21/2016 3:27:00 PM
My first poem in here, i rarely write once and they are all very simple poems on what I see around me in life :)
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