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Unwelcome Season

The gloomy days of winter And soggy clouds of rain Make me wonder if sunshiny days Will ever come again. I am so tired of galoshes, Umbrellas and rain coats. I'd like to carry only bottles Of sun lotion in my totes. Mr North Wind take your icy blasts And blow them far away To where polar bears would say welcome And walruses and caribou play. I am sitting by a heater With a blanket on my knees. I see my garden through my window As it slips into deep freeze. The sports of winter don't amuse me. I have never learned to ski. I'd like to winter in Hawaii Or in sunny Italy. Now that Santa Claus has gone back To the land of ice and snow, I must tell you Mr. Winter, It's also time for you to go. 1/17/13

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Date: 2/8/2013 5:32:00 PM
way to go with your top win, Joyce. you rocked it. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/5/2013 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win :) nice 1
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:20:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:35:00 AM
LOL This is adorable, Joyce. I hope Mr. Winter complies with your request, but I still think we have a couple more months of winter. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:52:00 AM
Great win
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:37:00 AM
I love the light-hearted version of your delightful poem, Joyce! You found me smiling and packing my bags for Hawaii!!! Congratulations! It is nice to share the spotlight with you!
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:09:00 AM
This is a super write Joyce and many congrats on your well deserved top spot xx
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Date: 2/4/2013 7:28:00 AM
A BIG win..congrats Joyce. BG
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Date: 2/4/2013 6:49:00 AM
congrats on a great win Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:35:00 AM
Awww. Joyce this is precious !! I love it!! Congratulations on your win!!! Big hugs. Love ya deb
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your First placement with this winning gem of a poem Joyce. Brava!
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:09:00 PM
congratulations on your winning write...
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce...Seren
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:02:00 PM
many congrats Joyce on your winning entry
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:56:00 PM
Congrats on your BIG Win...top of the list ! Woo hoooo !! Excellent poem for Winter Begone !!!
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:56:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA
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Date: 1/18/2013 8:18:00 AM
nice one, joyce! cheer up - spring is just around the corner...
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Date: 1/18/2013 3:21:00 AM
I hope this is for the contest! Good to read your work as always!
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Date: 1/18/2013 12:19:00 AM
Fun! I say go away Mr winter too! enjoyed!
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