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I feel like feces in a toilet unwanted and flushed away like a rotten egg; scorned cracked and then thrown away maybe even like spoiled milk one taste and i make you sick; then i'm thrown away i'm like a bugger in your nose you just got to get rid of me like pigeon poop you wouldn't want me to touch you it's funny because to me, you're like a million bucks i'll want you all the days of my life but to you; i'm just a tissue that you use and then, throw away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/22/2016 10:51:00 PM
LaTisha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:18:00 PM
I'm sorry that you feel so bad. Think about this. If I walked over to my cat and said to her,"You are nothing but a piece of____." Would she be one just because I said that to her? Likewise, you aren't any of those things that you say you feel like. You are a child of God. You have worth and are valuable to your Heavenly Father. He loves you. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:06:00 AM
Latisha, You are not a rotten egg or any other horrible comparision you have made.You are lovely creation of God and are lovely in every way.Who is anyone on this earth to want to not want you, God wants you and he had made you with love and care.So you are HIS lovely creation.
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Date: 4/27/2009 7:04:00 PM
How sad that your father makes you feel this way, LaTisha. I hope the two of you find a way to get closer. Life is short, each day is precious. Bless you, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2009 5:42:00 PM
so my father doesn't deserve me? well glad you think so, I thought so to then I started to wonder if it was in fact me that didn't deserve him. don't worry I'd never be like this over a boyfriend. thank you for your comment
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