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Am i living a illusion of prosperous dreams I hope to explore wishes even if reality is not what it seems I share thoughts with a force not explained yet Will i cope with this transitions ideas not set I picture my self with greatness redefined Its not to far to slither through imaginable illusions I face my own hallucinations alone but reality is all i glance upon My words i speak but what you hear is feelings of a heart that is torn Breath by breath i take a deep sigh as i see that to an undesirable place am drawn The walls are slowly closing on me

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Date: 1/22/2016 11:30:00 PM
Hi, Kadafi WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/22/2016 7:29:00 AM
Kadafi,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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