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Yes, I am willing to try for you again and I will keep trying until the sun dies and the moon has fallen from this dismal American sky. Yes, I will search for you in the darkness when my hands smell of nicotine and the last flickering light from the church has faded I will fight for you 'till my breath stops till the night ends and the light comes, the wine's gone and the tears rush, till we're silent admiring the stars I'll keep fighting. (Rumi- Visual 3)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2015 2:06:00 PM

Aleah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/7/2015 2:16:00 PM

Aleah, why not name the poem (Forever) or (A Good Fight). That's what I read. Love it :), Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT