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I’m giving up Life is empty now My dust is blowing In the wind Because of sin I’m ready to die As fast as I can At my own hand All is over for Me, because I chose to Not be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/26/2010 6:34:00 PM
Very sad and frstrating thoughts you have penned
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:12:00 PM
Suicide is the most selfish act a person can commit. Tomorrow may be better. Touching write because I have been on the bottom and could not see a way out. It is never easy, take it one step at a time, and yes you will get knocked down but you must get back up and try again. Eventually you will succeed
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:04:00 PM
what if tomarrow is better? what if you fall in love or hit the lottery. what if tommarow you see the savior living in your land. is'nt it worth the wait. jhl
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