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Until the Sun Rises

No trick or treaters on the street they're all in bed now, getting sleep, Candies piled high upon the floor collected from each neighbor's door, Smoke rises from the pumpkin's grin the day's magic still burns within, Restless spirits are set free to roam and find their way back to home, An earthly reunion until the sun rises with those who've met their demises, It's time for October's farewell scene on the final night of Halloween, The harvest moon is setting low opposite the rising sun's gentle glow, Wandering souls leave us for another year and say goodbye and shed a tear, Because, they surely miss us, too their tears become the morning dew, To stain the leaves a shining gold and welcome in wet November's cold.

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Date: 10/9/2016 5:51:00 PM
Awe.. somebody is ready for Halloween ... Very beautiful write and congratulations on your win, Kelly :) Hugs Eve
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/11/2016 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve... I'm sorry for not replying to your comment sooner. I haven't been on Poetry Soup very much lately. Just can't seem to find the time anymore :)
Date: 10/9/2016 2:49:00 AM
congrats on the win Dear Kelly, this one is wonderful...there is pain, there is a picture of what happens until sun rises, there is hope in the shining gold of the Sun!! i loved it! :)//love, Anu:)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/11/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anu. I really appreciate your kind congrats and comments :)
Date: 10/8/2016 4:34:00 PM
Kelly, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "No Words" if you'd like. LINDA
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/11/2016 4:43:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda :)
Date: 6/9/2016 4:24:00 PM
Don't know how I haven't read you..Great write on this and the others.Take care,Jai
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/7/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Jai. I really do appreciate your kind comments... Please forgive me for not replying sooner. I haven't been around much lately. I just needed to take a break from writing for awhile :)
Date: 2/8/2016 1:26:00 AM
Nicely done... I like your Rhyme.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/17/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 2/8/2016 12:34:00 AM
Nicely done... I like you Rhyme.
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Date: 2/1/2016 1:10:00 PM
Their tears become the morning dew ... how beautifully expressed ... loved it. Hugs, Bobby
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/9/2016 12:55:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poems. I appreciate that so much, Bobby... Hugs :)
Date: 1/23/2016 11:54:00 AM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/4/2016 8:05:00 PM
I really appreciate this lovely comment, Funom. Thank you :)
Date: 11/2/2015 8:42:00 AM
I love this after the party scene where the spirits make a slow, reluctant exit. Of course, I'm sympathetic to the specters hanging around. ~Jan
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/10/2015 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jaycee. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem! ...I wanted to write something different for Halloween this year. Sometimes people forget the holiday is also about remembering those who have passed away.
Date: 10/24/2015 9:06:00 PM
Great Halloween poem with uplifting verses. Great closing verses! A7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/5/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert... I think sometimes people forget about the lighter side of Halloween and remembering our loved ones who are gone.
Date: 10/24/2015 10:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/4/2015 10:41:00 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed it, BL. Thank you for your kind comments!
Date: 10/22/2015 8:32:00 AM
I love the mood of this piece! Bravo.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/4/2015 10:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Rick!
Date: 10/21/2015 3:12:00 AM
Excellent poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/3/2015 5:48:00 PM
I appreciate your nice comments, Ravi. Thank you!
Date: 10/20/2015 8:12:00 PM
So nice to read your writing this evening, thank you. Light & Love
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/3/2015 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie. I am so glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 10/19/2015 5:58:00 PM
A well and a beautiful penned. I enjoyed reading this, think for shared..............A.M.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/3/2015 4:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, A.M. I am so glad you enjoyed this poem :)
Date: 10/18/2015 1:41:00 PM
Terrific, Kelly, and definitely in the spirit of things. Boo ! Viv x
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/1/2015 10:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Viv... It's been a fun Halloween weekend!
Date: 10/16/2015 3:16:00 AM
This is golden Kelly! I love Halloween. It gives us all the opportunity to become children again, though that is not the way it was intended. But Americans have changed it a lot. Made it into a fun holiday. #7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/1/2015 9:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie... I love Halloween, too. Though we grow up so quickly, there are still many ways to enjoy and celebrate the holiday. It does make us all feel like kids again :)
Date: 10/15/2015 2:08:00 PM
Nicely done, Kelly. Love those fantastic last three lines - Always save the best for last! My very best regards, Kelly! :) john
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/1/2015 8:18:00 PM
I always appreciate your nice comments, John. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Date: 10/14/2015 10:56:00 PM
Lovely write.. I sometimes wish that I could go back to days like this. I miss being a kid sometimes. Lol.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/1/2015 8:07:00 PM
I miss being a kid sometimes, too, especially around the holidays... Thank you for your kind comments, Sharaun. I really appreciate it!
Date: 10/14/2015 5:23:00 PM
Dear Kelly You wrote about my poem taking you back to those easier days of your childhood, well this poem of yours did the same for me tonight, love this journey backwards my friend and yes I'd love to go back and trick or treat write besides you my friend, and I'd give all the toosie rolls two, just don't ask me for the sweet tarts ok, lol I love them to much ok maybe one or two for you after reading this sweet treat of write from you, lol cheri
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/1/2015 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Cheri. It would be fun if we could go trick or treating just once more!... I hope you had a Happy Halloween, my friend :)
Date: 10/14/2015 5:14:00 PM
Nice Flow...well Done
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/22/2015 12:15:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Jared!
Date: 10/14/2015 5:06:00 PM
Excellent imagery that adorns a lovely Halloween poem, Kelly. #7 ~ Congratulations on POTD!! Hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/22/2015 12:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paul. I was honored to see that my poem had been chosen as the Poem of the Day!
Date: 10/14/2015 3:23:00 PM
congrats on your POtD citation, kelly.. i was rooting for this.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/21/2015 11:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for your support of me and this poem, Nette. I am honored that it was chosen to be the Poem of the Day!
Date: 10/14/2015 2:03:00 PM
I am simply amazed....your words take me through a phase....pure inspiration and nothing more....each write is better than the one before....;)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/21/2015 11:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eric. Your kind comments are very encouraging to me :)
Date: 10/14/2015 1:52:00 PM
Wonderful!! Congrats!! :) -LU
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/20/2015 8:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura!
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