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Untamed Hearts

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Untamed Hearts

In youth, love blows away like the wind, then comes home again on warm breeze. Wafting, waiting heartache rescinds. Wild blooms, untamed, bend free. With ev’ry beat, hearts more sentient grow and rosebuds blossom when tended. As sunlight thaws winter’s harsh snow, fickle hearts may be transcended. Will feral hearts forever be wanting, bleeding with each thorny prick? Fallen petals fade away, daunting. Blooms of love worth the pain they inflict. **Quote: "The heart is forever inexperienced" For Juli- Michelle's Write with your Heart: 12 lines Contest, 10/11/13

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  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Perhaps without the thorns, we would not appreciate the beauty of the rose? I love the metaphors you have used for inspiration!! Lovely poem, Rhonda!

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 5:44:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:46:00 PM
    Fabulous! Rhonda, you have a great winning poem. I absolutely love the last line...perfect way to sum it up. CTB

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 8:32:00 AM
    You are on fire--the similes leap off the page!

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 9:27:00 PM
    This is a tremendous write my friend! You have successfully impressed me by the splendor of this incredible poem! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:31:00 PM
    your words fall beautifully across the page...good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Absolutely stunning work. The last stanza is most amazing :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting.Sara

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:45:00 PM
    love this beauty, Rhonda - the last line especially

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:12:00 PM
    Every heart says its alive within its own small world. When boundaries expand outside, it's amazing what's unfurled. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 1:15:00 PM
    Awesome piece here Rhonda, fitting title for this gem as well. Wishing you the best for the contest ;) enjoy the weekend. Love & hugs Wilma

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 10:11:00 AM
    beguiled by the very sensitive expression of what truly lies within a heart that bleeds, rhonda... what a pleasure to read you today..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Loads of enlightening truth. Let the heart reign, through the trials & the smiles.