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Unstoppable

Sad clouds why do you cry ... Why you throw your tears on us... Sweet ocean, your waves are too high... Are you mad at us... Crumbling ground you're so tough and strong... Your supposed to keep us standing isn't that true... Wind your so loud, have we done anything wrong... Your so cruel and unstoppable we can't break through you.... But we have a weapon you can't break ... Yes,that's true you can't stop our prayers or even take....

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White Sage

Date: 1/30/2016 9:07:00 AM

wow! and wow again! this is simply excellent, well penned Dalia, well expressed...such lovely write, no matter how strong any of those can be, surely they can't break our prayers

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/3/2016 1:02:00 AM

Thank you very much for your lovely comment, much appreciated, hugs / / :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 10/21/2015 9:14:00 PM

wow, simply wow is all I can say....your words have Beautified inspiration on this day....with the wind, the most unstoppable natural force of all....it will halt if we Pray, He Always Answers That Call....great write dalia....;)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/8/2016 8:31:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend for ur supportive words and your pleasant comment , I'm glad u liked it , much appreciated, hugs / / :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/17/2015 4:58:00 PM

Hello Dalia!! This is a very powerful Light Poetry write for sure. I really like your progressive build-up to the final couplet with the images: "Sad clouds," Sweet ocean," "Crumbling ground," and "Wind your so loud." Prayers are indeed that all-important weapon at our disposal. Excellent Work!! "7" Cheers and Best, Gary

Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/17/2015 5:20:00 PM

Thank you very much dear friend, I really do appreciate it..... I'm so happy that someone could get this poem right , glad u understand it and glad u were able to see the pictures...... I'm honored that u liked it.... :)