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Unspoken Words

words written but never spoken thoughts in your head not always true decisions made then changed in a second choices made just to make it through complete oblivion only a heart beat away darkness surrounds to suffocate the light always seems so far away caught in the depths of sadness struggling to claw your way out so many things in life to be happy about why is it so hard to see i open my eyes and see whats in front of me time to leave the past behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2010 5:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 4/3/2010 5:49:00 AM
Such a universal piece.One we can all relate to and comprehend.You have expressed yourself well and I have really enjoyed reading.Thank you *smiles*
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:11:00 PM
very nice write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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Date: 4/1/2010 9:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mellaney. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/1/2010 7:32:00 AM
I can identify with this feeling. I think it is very common in this reality we live in. This is well written and I enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/1/2010 7:22:00 AM
I like this
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