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Unrequited Love

Unrequited Love I want to be with you Your smile makes my soul rejoice Every time were apart I forget how to breathe You are a part of my existence But I’m me I never have the right words to say so when every your away I think to my self What if ? What if I was better with words What if I stood out? What if I was gifted with a special talent Would she notice me? I am hopelessly lost in this feeling And I don’t know what to do My first unrequited love

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/29/2013 6:44:00 AM

wonderful with words I might say Congrats on your featured poem! Laura :)

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 4:06:00 PM

Alri, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2013 11:06:00 PM

Alrio, very lovey, -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"