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Unremarkable Slumber

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Below is the poem entitled Unremarkable Slumber which was written by poet Renee Kelly. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Unremarkable Slumber

Softly she snoozes
While the wide world whirls wildly
Never noticing

(fun with combining senryu and alliteration)

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  1. Date: 7/18/2011 4:41:00 AM
    What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Renee. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 3:09:00 PM
    cool and clever combo Renee.. great contest material luv..

    Kelly Avatar Renee Kelly
    Date: 7/17/2011 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh - is there a combo contest? I just sort of popped this one out. I've been having fun with senryus and thought I'd try a bit of alliteration with it :D
  1. Date: 7/17/2011 12:10:00 PM
    Very nice Renee... a quiet somber...always Michael

    Kelly Avatar Renee Kelly
    Date: 7/17/2011 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Michael!