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Unnaturally Natural

Sobbing , weeping he slept that night, Heavy on his heart, Pain inside. Rose up from the slumber, Heavy fog clouding his eyes, Dense and denser it grew, And feeble eyes lost all hope to preview. Creeping on anxiety, agony and shame, Society looking at them as people insane. Understanding their pain is not what they expect, Just a longing for acceptance , love and respect. Paralysed they are by the society, Crunched in the game of hierarchy. Broad in thinking you say, Lack the guts to discuss sex any way. Unnatural act and thus illegal, Do you even know the syllable of this evil !! *********** or Dignity, what is it ? The fickleness of your mind is still uplift. Blacking them out, Is this the solution ? Or ending their bumpy journey, Is this that will bring the evolution ??

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Date: 8/13/2014 6:46:00 AM
Awesome!
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Date: 2/23/2014 1:56:00 PM
Nice dear ...Salute your thoughts . Keep it up . We are with you . We shall create a solution for our better tomorrow .
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Date: 2/23/2014 6:25:00 AM
Thankyou all for the warm welcome. Surely that i am gonna enjoy it with such beautiful people around.. :)
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Date: 2/22/2014 7:46:00 PM
Niharika, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/22/2014 8:06:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Niharika - I choose your first well written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2014 6:11:00 PM
Niharika, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Niharika Goel
Date: 2/21/2014 11:06:00 PM
Thankyou so much for the love and support Linda.. i am mesmerized by the warmth of your friendship, :)

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