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We have been friends, A long time now, I love you more each day, I know you have a woman Of your own, So I dont let the words Get away. When I see, what she does To you. It makes me want to cry, After all the pain you've Been through. I feel like I should try. Let me just love you. Let me show you what Is right. Let me put my arms around you And, give you love tonight. Let me show you what your Missing, from the evening To days light. You are my hearts desire, ive waited for my entire Life. A man as fine as you, Should not be treated, so unkind. My thoughts are so confused If only you knew, what was on my mind. She could never feel for you, What I harbour within, my soul, Your that special man to me, One I long to hold, Is it not that obvious, The ups & downs we've shared. The memories both, good & bad Our hopes, dreams, and fears. The arguments & disagreements, Sometimes, you see my view. Friendship, love & trust, I also see that, do you? When we share a greeting, a laugh or just a smile. Do you ever see or feel, The emotions that I hide? Let me just love you, Let me show you what Is right. Let me put my arms around You, and give you love tonight. Let me show you what your Missing, from the evening to Dayslight. You are my hearts desire, Ive waited for my entire Life. A lesson that ive learned in life "Love does not wait" So here it goes, I must convey & spill my guts, with faith. Risking our friendship Is such a scarey thought. But living with, the what ifs Really truly hurts. Now my unknow feelings, are, finally set free. Vulnerable yet honest, Hope you take a chance on me. Posted 7/11/13 For anne currin contest.

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Date: 8/11/2013 2:04:00 PM
Unrequited love. Great subject and great lyrics. I know this feeling all to well as I have been on both sides. Some times the time is not right and we must wait. But time is on your side. Live and love and don't wait he will know his crime. Kilmer, always...
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/11/2013 4:00:00 PM
Hey kilmer:) thanks so much for your comment. I wrote this just as a song but like you, I can relate to being on both sides. Your right!! alot of it is timing, timing & love go hand in hand, can be 2 very fragile parts of us. Ive learned not to wait anymore not to guard this fragile heart but that took maturity & time. Your lovely!!!!~<3~ cherie
Date: 7/31/2013 7:50:00 AM
Your lovely Gerald,,,,many thanks:) ~<3~ cherie
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Date: 7/31/2013 1:42:00 AM
I'm taking a chance on you, Cherie.
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Date: 7/24/2013 8:52:00 PM
Hi morgen, yes it was in one of the contest & thanks so much for your lovely comment. So glad to see you, my friend...really happy your here. I look forward to reading from you...onelove cherrybunny lol:)
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Date: 7/24/2013 8:14:00 AM
cherry bunny is tis the winning poem they are saying? hope you win more. . . my dearest friend
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:53:00 PM
Cherie, Anne, has nice taste ..... congrats with your Song Lyrics entry... love~ SKAT
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:14:00 AM
Hi skat, thanks appreciate your comment,,, hugs:0) ~~<3 cherie
Date: 7/18/2013 3:59:00 PM
A touching bit of work here! There are a few typos here so look it over. Best of luck in the contest with this fine poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:12:00 AM
Hi matthew thanks for pointing that out will,, make changes, and thanks for your lovely comment, appreciate it:) ~<3~cherie....
Date: 7/15/2013 10:43:00 AM
Such painful & stunning honesty. The heart on your sleeve shines very bright.
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:17:00 PM
Hi Drake,,, thanks for your lovely & kind comment,,, really aapreciate it:0) ~<3 cherie
Date: 7/15/2013 10:31:00 AM
A great piece my friend (applause) and thanks for deserting me stranger :)
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:15:00 PM
Lol m ty so much, id never desert you my friend,,,, blessings always xxoo cherie~<3
Date: 7/15/2013 9:37:00 AM
this never missed a beat... sweet and musical.. congrats, cherie...:)
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/15/2013 7:13:00 PM
Many thanks nette, appreciate your kind comment thankyou:0)
Date: 7/14/2013 6:07:00 PM
enjoyed your winning poem, in the lyric poem contest.... always *LINDA
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:12:00 PM
Hi linda, thanks so much:)
Date: 7/14/2013 8:15:00 AM
It seems I was right! Congratulations on your win. Hugs Rick
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Date: 7/14/2013 2:24:00 PM
Hi rick!!! Definitely were thanks so much, truly appreciate your kindness...blessings cheriex
Date: 7/14/2013 8:14:00 AM
This is really a beautiful song....congratulations on your win
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Date: 7/14/2013 2:17:00 PM
Hi Donna, thanks so much, really appreciate your comment:) cherie...
Date: 7/13/2013 4:44:00 AM
- A touching poem from you Cherie - very well written! - Good luck in the contest, I hope you will win. - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2013 6:53:00 AM
Thanks so much.lise,,, always appreciate your kindness & lovely comments thankyou!!! Have a great weekend to thanksxx <3 cheriex
Date: 7/13/2013 2:09:00 AM
A poem of beautifully woven words of hidden love...the futility of the "love, what if's?" Words nearly all can Identify with. D.N.Read ;{>
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Date: 7/13/2013 6:49:00 AM
Many thanks for your lovely comment DN...much appreciate your kindness,, blessings always Cherie:0)
Date: 7/13/2013 1:52:00 AM
a sad love song. Your feelings are sprinkled all over the reader. Nice verse. Lots of Hugs
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Date: 7/13/2013 6:46:00 AM
Greetings Manel,, thanks so much for your kind comment. Really appreciate it:) onelove,,,~<3~ cheriex
Date: 7/12/2013 10:48:00 AM
this is truly a fantastic piece, I know Anne will love it. Well done. I wrote a song as well this morning. I guess we are both inspired today.
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Date: 7/12/2013 6:56:00 PM
Hi rick thanks so much for, your comment, it really made my day!! Your so right inspiration, is flowing:) and your poem was awesome... :0)
Date: 7/11/2013 9:28:00 PM
Hi Cherie, I to hope he takes on all the beauty and wonders of you.. sometimes if you don't risk, you will never know...love the poem... a wink from me to you.. ;-) LINDA
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Date: 7/12/2013 10:32:00 AM
Hi Linda, thanks so much for taking the time to comment. It's just a fictional write for a lyrical poem. Definitely true, have to take risk, sometimes. Appreciate your kind comment:0) ~<3 Cherie

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