Universe Spirals

. Universe spirals Lighting the way to future.. Fear unknown but drawn

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James Fraser

Date: 3/25/2011 9:11:00 AM

Fine Haiku Sara, a joy to read. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/23/2011 6:47:00 PM

Hi Sara, this one's a mind probe. Visual, as though one is able to see the "Universe Spirals", the light, and fear of the unknown. I hope all's well with you and yours! I love the name, Whitie..s'like a poem in itself. Thanks for your comments, they take me back to other thoughts and feelings. Wishing you the best!! Mikki

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2011 2:27:00 PM

Hello Sara, how are you.. I just read your news on Doris, page.. I sure hope you are feeling better... As for me..i have not been on as much... One of my sisters just passed.. so you see hearing your news.. put me back on the emotinal road... God bless you and your family... take care,,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 10:36:00 AM

Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments and concern Sara. Yes the poem is about my husband Don. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 10:16:00 AM

I know you don't usually enter contests, Sara, but this is extraordinary and I do hope you submit it for Rick's contest. Outstanding! Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 3/23/2011 8:36:00 AM

This seems perfect for the picture, Sara - love it : ) Jack. Hope you are on the mend?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2011 7:39:00 AM

Words so true Sara.. looking at the photo your words fit so well my friend.. good luck in the contest with this elegant entry .. hope u are much better today luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 7:39:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Sara. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. I hope you are feeling much better now my friend. Love, Carol