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Universe

Our universe touches our five senses. Visions of the darkness as a fire blazes, Our suns flare like a whispering wind Venus sending calls in mysterious flavor. Contact with Mars brings life’s substance. Earth entices the universe filled with tears. Mother Moon our overseer of natural reason. Five elements hold focal point together still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/14/2009 7:24:00 AM
Very unique and well done! Yes, good luck if this is for the contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/14/2009 7:07:00 AM
Very nicely done, Cecil!! Good luck if this enters the contest! Excellent job! ~ Carrie
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