Unity

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~ Immersed in repose, I am IN the Earth, not on ... It's essence in me ~

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 1/7/2017 2:08:00 AM

Fantastic Haiku.so the Earth is pregnant with you?

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/7/2017 3:31:00 AM

Thank you, Jannie ... I like to think that ALL of us who feel part of the earth are more like cells, making up its collective conscience - responsible for its health ... we're failing at that, I think, overall. I hope we change that. :-)

White Wolf

Date: 12/9/2016 8:04:00 AM

I love this haiku! So true too! Well said, Greg!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2016 9:17:00 AM

Thanks, Rick - much appreciated!