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Unheavenly

Hollow eyes of a skull shrouded by a heavy mist People suffer condemning others within foul hate Hateful stares piercing through the back of their skulls soul domain Raping hearts violently shred inner purity Inside deep council weeping in ugly visions hurt Tainted with nightshades unforgiving it creates wars Ugly bitterness seeping into their spines chilling Nobility breaking chains in bondage heart aching Blood sucking leeches drain life from the living temple Greedy vultures picking dead meat from the bones altar Twisted talons, judgment overpowers emotions Merciless machines killing without love and conscience Turns upside down human virtue inside this world's wrath We all know our hearts plea for justice's sake writhes in lies Devoured by parasites, greed is the choice of weapon Yet ignorance plays its role turning blindly the eyes Rolling down crocodile tears, colorless emotions Tears bleed bathing inside heartache's shameful reminder Raindrops of deep hurt remains within salted old wounds Holding love as the most precious and purest gift pearl Undying beauty fading ashes dust blowing Over memories stored in a yellowish photo In what is right and what is wrong we cannot deny Rainbow remnants pull on a thread of thought sewn deeply A Collaborated Poem by Liam Mc Daid and Angeline lim This poem is written in the Unheavenly style that we created. It's written in 6 lines of 13 syllables.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/29/2016 4:54:00 AM
Love the dark theme...... it's an eye-opener ;)
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Date: 6/28/2016 10:29:00 AM
Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful, powerful, but very deep and sad,filled of so many emotions poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Angeline.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness.Just awesome!A very beautiful, heartfelt,profound love poem to be held very close to my heart.Just amazing!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding imagery!Excellent collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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