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Unfunny

The class clown Made society Frown Should put his *** down I know barely anything on politics Probably nothing And this fake satire Isn't the proper attire For whats up Don't take a sip from my cup And open your mind really stop being silly I make kids laugh As If I'm a sexy giraffe I'm really the plague Hitting the young youth Just grow up and Drink your own cup

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/10/2014 7:27:00 AM

Nice flow of words and expressions. Congrats on a fine win, jomarc

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2014 8:48:00 PM

Jomarc, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.... :) This was a very tough one to judge... GEEES, enjoy my latest blog if you like.... always & forever... Linda

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 4/5/2014 3:58:00 PM

This is actually funny :) Welcome to the soup, Jomarc!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2014 1:57:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jomarc :) - I choose your first nice written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/4/2014 9:28:00 PM

Hi Jomarc,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Jomarc Bernardo
Date: 4/5/2014 1:15:00 PM

thanks for the feedback! I love the community!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2014 7:55:00 PM

Jomarc, ha love it, great ending,,, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jomarc Bernardo
Date: 4/5/2014 1:16:00 PM

Thanks you so much for the feedback! And thanks for the warm welcome too:)